Bases on Fraudulent Data是不是改成Bases on Dubious Data


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送交者: gadfly 于 2009-11-27, 09:42:10:

回答: 来一篇“原创”的,还没写完,明天再说。请先提意见 由 Yush 于 2009-11-26, 23:54:46:

1) Beaumont Hospitals' Nerve Re-Routing Trial Bases on Fraudulent Data
 -> Beaumont's Nerve Re-Routing Trial Bases on Dubious Data

2) On the record in the ClinicalTrials.gov registry, Dr. Xiao's review article is on the top of the list of Publications
 -> In its registration record on ClinicalTrials.gov, at the top of the list of publications is a link to Dr. Xiao's review article

3) In a press release from Beaumont, it states the similar assertion:
 -> A similar assertion was made in a press release from Beaumont:

4) It thus can be concluded that the trial at Beaumont is based on the results provided by Dr. Xiao

'concluded'语气会不会太强?

 -> It thus can be hypothesized/inferred that the trial at Beaumont is largely based on the results provided by Dr. Xiao

5) This means there were 174 cases of effectiveness in March 2006, whereas 177 cases of success back to the end of 2004, not to mention the the number of cases increased during this period.

“not to mention the the number of cases increased during this period” 这句话是不是指2006年病人人数增加的很少这回事?




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